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Editing Takes Forever

Pam Baddeley, Writer Posted on 27 July 2015 by Pam18 January 2016
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Courtesy of ClkerFreeVectorImages, Pixabay, public domain

Well, another length gap from my last blog, but I have at least been doing ‘stuff’.  My separate blog post on cover design for self published books has been in preparation for weeks, and I finally published that today.

The main thing I’ve been doing, apart from working with a designer to complete my custom cover for ‘Rian’, which is now complete, is slowly but surely doing a final line edit on that MS.  I’ve been doing that under Camp NaNoWriMo this month and have met my goal of 20,000, since one hour of editing equates to 1,000 words on Camp; in fact, I’ve managed 21,000 and may even do a bit more before I have to validate.  I found one or two more glitches:  for example, if everyone who has been ‘touched by evil’ is affected in the climactic part of the book (not saying too much to avoid spoilers) then the character who has been becoming increasingly paranoid and has already made an attempt on another character’s life obviously has to be affected also.  After so many years of working on this book I’ve only just spotted that!  Never mind, it wasn’t a major problem to fix as he had previously run off in the caverns looking for someone, so I just had to amend one small section.

One thing I’m thinking of doing is submitting to the open submission period that Hodderscape are running shortly.  The nice people at Hodder won’t hang onto the MS for very long if they don’t want to publish it so it seems sensible to have a last attempt at traditional publication for this book, having got it into the best shape it’s ever been.  Just need to face the toil of getting such a huge story into a two page synopsis.

I only completed one ROW80 goal from last time, which was to get the cover done, so my goals are now:

  • complete the Rian update and submit to Hodderscape
  • research how to format manuscripts for self publishing on Kindle
  • obtain quotes for professional editing (though they will probably work out far too expensive)

So, now for those nice people at ROW80:

Posted in Work In Progress, Writing Challenges | Tagged My goals, NaNoWriMo, progress, ROW80, wip

Book Cover Research

Pam Baddeley, Writer Posted on 27 July 2015 by Pam8 September 2015
Book covers with a question mark

Courtesy of Nemo, Pixabay, public domain

You can’t judge a book by its cover, right?  Well, the trouble is, everyone does.  I had a rapid and interesting education on the subject earlier this year when I commenced my search for a suitable cover for my epic fantasy novel, formerly known as ‘Rian’, and I thought I’d pass on some of the findings for the benefit of other writers who are embarking on self publishing and wondering what to do about a cover.

Before you start looking, its a good idea to check what style is being used for your genre at present.  Cover design is subject to fashion just as anything else.  Years ago, it was standard to have a painting of some kind; this was especially so in the fantasy and science fiction genres, where it’s not exactly easy to obtain a photograph of a dragon or alien.  But over the years, photographic manipulation has become the standard and is now used widely even in these genres.  In fact, there now seems to be a trend towards what I think of as anti-covers, where there is no image, just some rather boring looking text in strange fonts on rather bland colours.  I think that started with literary fiction and let’s hope it is a short-lived trend.

Cover Styles

For most genre fiction, photographic manipulation is still the standard method employed, usually utilising images available from the many online stock image libraries, such as Shutterstock.  My own theory is that this is due to the general developments in the traditional publishing industry over the past twenty years, driven by the need to reduce costs.  For example, the slush pile disappeared, so that publishers didn’t have to pay in-house or freelance readers (the people who filtered the slush pile and passed the decent stuff onto the editors) .  In the same way, it must be a lot cheaper to employ someone to manipulate images in Photoshop, taken from stock image libraries, than to engage a traditional artist to paint a cover from scratch (whether old-school or on a Wacom tablet or something similar).  But that’s just my theory.

Doing Your Research

Before plunging in and buying premade covers or commissioning your own, have a good look at books in your genre that are doing well on Amazon, or visit your local bookshop if you’re fortunate enough to still have one.  Preferably do both.  Be aware that, online, covers are shown only as small thumbnails, so you need to aim for something that will be intelligible to the person scanning their monitor, or more likely their smartphone or tablet.  You only have a second or two to snag their attention, so you’ll need a design that doesn’t get lost when miniaturised.  For this reason, a lot of modern covers show only one character unless it’s a romance, in which case a clinch is standard.  But even if your story features three or four important characters, the lesson is, don’t try to depict them all on the cover or it will be crowded and muddled in thumbnail view.

One article I came across when researching available designers, is a blog post on the top 10 ebook cover design sites from Big Sky Words.  I checked out all the referenced sites and found that they varied from pretty reasonable to what I have to consider expensive, but it was an interesting starting point. And JM Madden’s site provides a large list of predesigned cover artists, some of whom I’ve used myself.

There are quite a few articles around to give tips on how to approach the design of your cover, especially if you are going to commission someone to produce a cover from scratch, what’s known as a ‘custom cover’.  See for example, this initial article from Scribbly Roo, illustrator and graphic designer, and the linked follow-ups.

Of course, you can end up with some really clichéd covers when the market is heading in one direction, and this Book Smugglers article considers the cover clichés affecting the fantasy genre.  In fact, this site has some sage advice on how to ensure your book is not immediately written off as ‘self published’.

As ever, things move fast on the internet and you’ll find as I did that a fair number of the links in these articles now go through to ‘page not found’ messages.  But there are enough that should be useful.

How Much?

Budget is obviously a big consideration.  Some of the sites are quite pricey even for just an ebook, and the charges for custom covers can exceed $600.  On the other hand, you can obtain covers very reasonably without resorting to the many sites that offer very cheap covers indeed which flag up ‘self published’ to the reader.  The more professional your book looks, the more likely it is that a reader will take a chance on an unknown author.

Personally I’ve found that you can obtain very good, pro looking covers for $70 or less, and that’s including a print on demand version for CreateSpace.  Generally, you should avoid those at the cheapest end that look as if they are just a single image with a title and author name superimposed, because it’s more likely that the image has been used by a number of other book covers.  Having said that, the first one I purchased cost $35 for ebook alone (with the option to add print later at another $35) on Littera Designs, which has some unusual reasonably priced premades (see more below).

Planning Your Cover

So what should you consider?  Well, the design should fit in with the general feel or emotion of your story.  It should not be a literal portrayal of a scene, and preferably you should avoid being too literal about character appearance either, though I have tried with my choices to at least have characters that don’t jar with the descriptions in the book.  One way covers frequently get round this is to show the person from the back view or to decapitate them!  But this has become quite a cliché in itself, and some readers do not like these covers.  Having said that, I’ve gone for that approach with my custom cover for ‘Rian’ (now to be renamed as I’ll reveal in the next few months) for the reasons I’ve explained below.

Colours are a consideration.  You quite often come across those which have a mainly blue hue or red theme.  There may be a psychological element with these, with colours suggesting a thriller theme – grey, black, blue – and romances perhaps being pastel and pink.  There may even be colours that put people off.

Keep it bold and uncluttered, as I’ve said above; don’t try to cram in references to all the important characters or elements of your story.

Designers I’ve Used

I’ve already purchased the ebook version of a cover for ‘Green Magic’ from the very nice people at Litteradesigns and will be going back there when it’s time to do the POD as they will add the spine and back cover very reasonably.  I didn’t go out of my way to deal with that book first; I just happened to see a cover that I thought would do very well when trawling through umpteen cover design sites for a cover for my fantasy epic.

I also bought a cover for ‘Mageborn’ from the very nice people at Fantasia Frog Designs and again will be returning in due course for the POD.  This was another one I stumbled across when searching for a cover for ‘Rian’.  In fact, I first purchased a web banner for the Ann Bradbury site from Fantasia Frog Designs, then came across the cover on their sister site, Spittyfish, and they very kindly did a few alterations to make it more fitting to the book’s main character.  I’m very pleased with the result, so much so, that I asked them to do a custom cover for ‘Rian’, having exhausted the possibilities, as my hero is a wiry, slender, dark haired nineteen year old, not one of the mightily thewed barbarians, bald headed blokes or blokes-in-cowls, that appear to dominate fantasy covers at present.   I’d looked for a back view with head not visible, in my quest to find a suitable image, though I’d not been successful.  Anyway, they did a lot of trawling for me and came up with one that was acceptable and were very patient and flexible while I requested various customisations.

I’ve also now purchased a couple of covers from Amygdala Designs who produce some very nice covers for a reasonable fee covering both print and ebook if you need them, and one from the Cover Collection.  I came across the Cover Collection early on in my search and loved quite a few of their covers, but they sadly did not fit any of my pending novels, so I was happy to find one on their sale page that should be usable for a not-yet-written sequel to ‘Mageborn’.

Now I just have to get on and edit (and in some cases write) all those books!

 

Posted in Cover design, Self Publishing, Work In Progress | Tagged cover design, progress, self publishing

Recap of a Busy Few Months

Pam Baddeley, Writer Posted on 24 May 2015 by Pam12 February 2016
Typewriter

Courtesy of TeJyng, Pixabay, public domain

OK, I’ll hold my hands up.  Another massive gap in blogging.  More life events.  Never mind, I’ve been working away behind the scenes researching the ins and outs of self publishing.  I’ll blog separately about aspects of that.

I’ve also been getting a few things done that I’ve meant to do for ages such as a proper web banner on my very skeletal site for my Ann Bradbury pseudonym, as can be seen here.  Thanks very much to Fantasia Frog Designs for a very affordable ready made web banner, to which they have added my title and byline.  Couldn’t pass that one up as it fitted so well with the contemporary supernatural and spooky theme of the books I intend to publish under the Ann Bradbury name.  The first will be ‘Green Magic’, though at the moment, I’m doing yet another edit of ‘Rian’ (which I’ll be giving a different title) first.

I also took the opportunity to engage a designer on Fiverr to produce a logo for the Kitsune Press UK site (the imprint I’ll be using to issue Ann Bradbury’s books). That’s now live.  I’ll be going through the same process for the Purpledragon Press site, which will be used for the straight fantasy titles such as Rian, once I can get some time to do a brief for the designer.  Although I need the dragon one first, it seemed sensible to start with the fox design as I’ve already made two unsuccessful attempts to get a logo previously and a fox is at least a real animal!

Apart from these activities, I’ve been editing the first eighteen chapters of Rian, plus investigating the price of professional editing – which is eyewatering – and covers for ebooks and CreateSpace POD versions, which vary again from massively expensive to extremely reasonable, especially if you can find something suitable among a designer’s premade covers.  I’ve already been lucky enough to find premades for ‘Green Magic’ and for ‘Mageborn’ – I didn’t go out of my way to find those, I was actually searching for something suitable for Rian but saw those instead.  I’m now working with the folks at Fanasia Frog Designs to produce a (reasonably priced) custom one for Rian.  Anyway, I’ve blogged separately about cover research.

Oh, and I also joined an email group, courtesy of the British Science Fiction Association, and sent round the first couple of chapters of a first-draft for comments, plus I did crits on those of the other members.  Will be nice to start getting some feedback:  I guess the correct definition would be ‘alpha’ readers, as they won’t be getting a full polished MS and in one chunk, which I’ve read is the ‘beta’ reader definition.

One thing that happened while editing Rian, was that I suddenly ‘saw’ a couple of inconsistencies that had been in the book for some years.  One was relatively minor and involved just rejigging a small sequence of events, but the other, at the start of Chapter 18, meant insertion of a new scene plus rejigging the start of the following section that was the original chapter beginning, to account for the fact that the characters were travelling on the north bank of the river initially but then had to get across in order to travel south-east.  This was the result of a changed premise, probably from something done ten years ago or more:  until now, I hadn’t “seen” that they were on the wrong side of the river.  To have changed it so that they started out on the right side would have introduced too many other problems.  It just goes to show that you can end up making large alterations in a book that has been reworked over and over, very thoroughly, for more years than you care to remember!

Anyway, if the folk of ROW80 haven’t completely forgotten me by now, my current goals are:

  • complete the Rian update
  • research how to format manuscripts for self publishing on Kindle
  • get the Rian cover completed

Anyway, here are some links to their blog entries:

Posted in Cover design, Self Publishing, Work In Progress | Tagged alpha readers, cover design, My goals, progress, ROW80, self publishing

Difficult Year

Pam Baddeley, Writer Posted on 20 August 2014 by Pam20 August 2014
sad dog by George Hodan

Sad dog by George Hodan

Well, not wanting to make excuses – I think the picture says it all – I’ll gloss over the unbelievable time lapse since my last post.  The trouble is, life happens and so no real writing has gone on in the interval, hence nowt to report.  However, things are looking up and I’m getting excited about the new possibilities that will be opening up for me later this year that are going to give me more time for writing and other important things.

In the meantime, I’ve attended the World Science Fiction Convention, which was held at the Excel in London, so I will probably blog about that shortly.  Stay tuned….

Anyway, if those nice folks at ROW80 haven’t given up on me entirely, here is the list of their updates:

 

Posted in Work In Progress, Writing Challenges | Tagged My goals, progress

Made a Goal at Last

Pam Baddeley, Writer Posted on 21 April 2014 by Pam21 April 2014
Daffodils

Daffodils. Copyright author.

Well, things have been on the slow side though I have been working on one of my goals for ROW80, so far not stated:

  1. Enter novel to Bridport
  2. Create Goodreads account and do the Udemy course I bought
  3. Do something on the WIP
  4. Get back to blogging

OK.  Well, I have been working on number 1 the last couple of weeks, re-revising the beginning of one of my novels and whittling the synopsis down yet again, this time to 300 words, less than a standard A4 sheet.

Today I went over it again and finally submitted it to the competition.  I’d better not say which novel as everything has to be 100% anonymous and blogging about it would be pretty dumb after I’ve very carefully made sure that no identification appears anywhere on the entry, as well as making sure I’d conformed to the various other rules which included specification of the font to be used.  It is always  worthwhile reading the rules of a competition several times over to make sure you’ve picked everything up.

So I am also doing something about number 4 as well, although a bit feebly.  Still, this is better than nothing.  I read some very good tips on Jennette Marie Powell’s blog this week about stress management – see the Two Tips for Stress Management link below.

Well, here is the ROW80 blog hop –

Posted in Work In Progress, Writing Challenges | Tagged Competitions, My goals, progress, ROW80

And the Journey Goes On…

Pam Baddeley, Writer Posted on 30 March 2014 by Pam30 March 2014
Horse and covered wagon

Horse and Covered Wagon circa 1924, public domain image

Well, only managed a small amount on the WIP today, to fill in a small gap that was pointed out to me by someone who kindly read chapter 2. Had to spend most of my time working on a completed MS that I want to submit to the new novel comp that Bridport are doing. Had to slice away at a synopsis that has already been pared down and pared down over the years because they want a 300 word synopsis. On a long book that’s tough and so it’s been hard work. But it’s done, I’ve had a read through the first 8000 words, with the odd polish, and now just have to re-read it all in a few days time to make sure there are no unnoticed typos before submitting it. Then I can get back to the WIP.

Whoops! Seems I somehow missed the last ROW80 post. Not sure how that happened, as I usually end up doing it on a Sunday. Never mind, here are the other ROW80 participants, please go ahead and browse –

Posted in Work In Progress | Tagged Competitions, My goals, progress, ROW80, wip

Entering the Fields

Pam Baddeley, Writer Posted on 23 March 2014 by Pam30 March 2014
Green fields by Larisa Koshkina

Green Fields by Larisa Koshkina

It’s been a toil, but I sat down today and made a push. After a lot of thought, I decided the best thing to do was edit chapter 2 where my protagonist is travelling to the city. I realised I had to create much more of an impression of the journey than I had in the first draft, rather than fast-tracking her to the bit where she’s climbing up the pass and then sees and approaches the city.

So that’s what I’ve done and it’s now helped me to, I hope, give a much better picture to the reader later on when my character is travelling around the country, of the context of what she is encountering, and will generally make more sense.

In the course of this, the stuff about farming, crops, the amount of rainfall in various areas, is being worked in naturally, which is how I wanted it.  So it’s all good.

Speaking of which, here are those nice people from ROW80 for another check-in (thanks for the encouragement ROW80 participants!):

Posted in Work In Progress, Writing Challenges | Tagged My goals, progress, ROW80, wip

Nothing to Report

Pam Baddeley, Writer Posted on 12 March 2014 by Pam23 March 2014
Public domain image of decomposing cow skull in desert

Decomposing cow skull in desert – public domain

Well, it’s embarrassing but the whole daunting mass of climate and agricultural research is still weighing me down and I haven’t been able to make any progress.  I do still keeping thinking about it though and trying to work out how to ensure that the land can get enough rainfall inland of the mountains in order to grow viable crops to support the population.  But I can’t get quality time around life to sit down and try to get my head around it.

Fantasy can be really hard sometimes and I’m having a bit of a guilt trip because of not being able to get on with it …..

Anyway, here are the fantastic folks at ROW80 to cheer us all up

Posted in Work In Progress, Writing Challenges | Tagged My goals, progress, ROW80, wip

Research is Hard

Pam Baddeley, Writer Posted on 23 February 2014 by Pam4 April 2022
van Gogh drawing of woman planting beets

Peasant Woman Planting Beets by Vincent van Gogh – Public Domain

Well, it can be.  I have made a list of questions I need answers to that relate to the terrain of the country and how this affects the climate.  I do have dry conditions on the leeward side of the mountains that circle around the inner part of the country, with wetter conditions on the coast BUT I also have a lot of farmers in the inner part of the country as well as different communities nearer the mountains that include a fishing folk on the riverside and some people who farm the lower terraces and herd a type of goat that gives long hair suitable for producing clothing and wall/floor coverings for the caves they live in.  So what on earth can the farmers etc. farm?  Still trying to work this out at the moment but it is the nitty gritty that is holding up the second draft, as this must work practically speaking.

Anyway, time to put up the list of those lovely ROW80 people ….

Posted in Work In Progress, Writing Challenges | Tagged My goals, progress, ROW80, wip

January Blues or Something?

Pam Baddeley, Writer Posted on 11 February 2014 by Pam4 April 2022
Clouds in Blue at Sundown by Lynn Greyling

Lynn Greyling’s Clouds in Blue at Sundown public domain image

As grovelling apologies are probably irritating, suffice to say life got in the way during January and I’ve only just started writing last weekend when I finally did some tidying up on the first draft of the novel I completed during NaNo.  That reminded me of the large amount of factual stuff that needs tackling which includes working out the climate, the rainfall pattern and how easy it is to make leather armor!  So that needs some serious time and thought.

Despite that, I did manage a few hours of tidying and tightening the second half of the novel, that is the part written for last year’s NaNo. So my ROW80 goal for whatever is left of this period is just to get back to it and get SOMETHING done!

Anyway, here are the latest ROW80 posts:

Posted in Work In Progress | Tagged progress, wip

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